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The Deadly Hours – Preview

CHAPTER ZERO

1244 AD
MONTSEGUR, FRANCE

Soon they would all be dead.

The Perfect watched as the pyre burst into flame at the base of the mountain. At the first break of dawn her fellow faithful would be thrown on the fire, and one by one they would exit this world and enter the glorious light of the next. She wished she could join them, but her task required her to stay alive, at least for a short time longer.

“I’m sorry to interrupt your prayers, master, but I’ve been told that the time has come for our escape.”

The Perfect turned to her apprentice, a young Believer with half her years and twice her enthusiasm. “Regrettably, you’re right. Are the others ready?”

“As ready as they could be for such a terrible journey.”

The Perfect placed a hand on the girl’s shoulder. She was closer to her than her own daughter, who had attempted to turn her in to the Holy Roman Empire. It wasn’t a surprise—the entire land had become traitorous since a bounty had been placed on her head. She was a Cathar, a dangerous title in France.

There was a day when the Cathars lived freely. They worshiped in secret, but not in fear. They were tolerated. Even revered. They were known as ‘the Good Christians’ for their virtue and benevolence. But times had changed. The Holy Roman Empire had become jealous of both their esteem, and more importantly, their money. People gave freely to the Cathars, knowing the dollars would be repaid tenfold in charity. The Holy Roman Empire, less so. So it was decided that the Cathars must be terminated, before their influence grew too wide to conquer.

They picked the right time. Bloodlust ran high on account of the many Crusades. But this was the first time the swords had pointed inward, at their own brothers, sisters, husbands, and wives.

Thousands had died already. Willingly. The Cathars were a peaceful people, their ethereal beliefs slacking the grip of the world on their hearts. They embraced death, recognized it as a porthole to a glorious future. But now they were slipping toward the edge of extinction—by morning the Cathars would be virtually eliminated from the earth.

The Holy Roman Empire had won.

Almost.

There was still one crucial detail that had managed to slip through their fingers. The one thing the Cathars held in their possession that the Holy Roman Empire desired most—

The Book of Love.

What the book contained was known only among the innermost core of the Cathar elect, the high priests, those known as ‘Perfects’. Legends had spread that the Book of Love caused even the most doubtful men to fall under the trance of Catharism when shown its pages. The Holy Roman Empire combated these tall tales with one of their own—

The book was a myth. Nothing more.

The Perfect looked down at the blessed Book of Love in her hands. It felt quite sturdy for a myth.

“Is that—?” The Believer stopped short of naming the fabled item aloud.

“It is,” the Perfect said, wondering if the girl would ever have a chance to marvel at the mystery locked inside, to be transformed by its power. She sensed the answer deep within her heart, but fought back the sorrow it provoked.

She put her arm around the Believer and led her toward the concealed rear exit of the mountaintop chateau. The people inside—numbering almost 400—sat in silent respect as they passed by. The Perfect reached out to them, but most could not hold their hands high enough to meet hers. Their bodies were withered and weak, a result of the endura, a ritual the Cathars reserved for the dying. The endura required the Cathar to be sustained only through small amounts of cool water, ensuring death with a week’s time.

The Perfect stopped before reaching the end of the line of people, kneeling to greet a particularly frail old woman. “I see that the endura has all but taken you,” she said softly.

The old woman slowly drew in a breath. “May it take me before they do.”

The Perfect placed her palm over her eyes. “Go,” she whispered in her ear. The old woman’s chest rose and fell a final time, and then she was gone.

The Believer leaned down and took the old woman’s hand. “Master, I don’t know if I have enough faith.”

The Perfect peered into the girl’s eyes, remembering that her mother and father were part of the company that would soon be burned alive. “You will when it’s required of you. Don’t worry, young one. God won’t place more on your shoulders than you can bear.”

As she spoke the encouragement, the Perfect felt the heaviness of her own burden—ensuring the preservation of the Book of Love. It was a task that required the strength of an army. She prayed that she might survive the test ahead.

Two men in brown cloaks approached. They were Listeners. Though they were both older than the Believer, they were less versed in the Cathar faith.

“Follow me,” the taller of the two said. “I’ve been told that the soldiers have retreated to the other side of the mountain. If we leave now we should have safe passage.”

The other scoffed. “The soldiers are the least of our worries. The slope is treacherous enough during the day. But we don’t even have the light of the moon to guide us tonight.”

“Our path is not one seen with human eyes,” the Perfect said. “If God desires it, He will lead us to safety.”

The Perfect led the way to the hidden door. She unlatched the locks and pushed it open. The night air was still. Not even the chirping of the crickets could be heard.

“Young one? Are you there?” whispered the Perfect.

“I’m here,” said the Believer.

“Do you remember me saying than when the time was right, you’d have the faith you need?”

“Yes.”

The Perfect took the girl’s hands, invisible in the darkness, and placed the Book of Love inside them. “Now is that time.”

“No—” the Believer said. “I can’t.”

“You must,” the Perfect said. “Once we reach the base of the mountain the soldiers will chase us. I’m no match for their speed. But you are.”

The Believer said nothing in response.

The Perfect’s confidence waned for a moment. Could this young one take on such an important task? Suddenly the Believer grasped the book. The Perfect smiled, wishing her young acolyte could see her warm approval. “May the spirit of Esclarmonde go with you,” she said. “Someday you will be rewarded for this act of bravery.”

But not tonight, the Perfect thought as they began their difficult journey down the mountain.
Tonight we will suffer.

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THE PRESENT
MONTSEGUR, FRANCE

Soon they would all be dead.

A cold wind rushed over the mountaintop. August Adams clutched his ex-wife April tightly to his chest and cried out for help.

No one responded to his call.

He pressed his fingers against her neck, desperate for a heartbeat, but there was no pulse.

He laid her on the ground, in the middle of the ruins where the Cathar castle once stood.
In the light of the full moon, he spied the outline of a killer, perched high on one of the four ancient walls, arms outstretched to the heavens.

August had risked everything to find the Book of Love.

How had everything gone so wrong?

50 Responses to “The Deadly Hours – Preview”

  1. Can’t wait. I loved the last two!

  2. Darcy on December 5th, 2009 at 7:40 am
  3. Guys, this looks to be one of Matt’s best! Can’t wait to read the rest. Sounds like august is in for a bad time, and he’s such a great person… just like some of the rest of us!

  4. Andi Hunt on December 6th, 2009 at 9:45 am
  5. I would like to have your books in Portuguese. It seems to be very interesting. Some estimates of translation?

  6. Marcos on December 8th, 2009 at 9:47 am
  7. I like cover #1.

  8. Lena Nelson Dooley on December 9th, 2009 at 11:31 am
  9. I vote for cover #3 – book sounds awesome

  10. Mark on December 9th, 2009 at 12:03 pm
  11. The first chapter looks great and I more than enjoyed the first two books. But it doesn’t make sense to buy the electronic version of his new book and get the other two – when I already have them in my library….it would be a waste…

  12. Neil Ferstand on December 9th, 2009 at 3:13 pm
  13. definitely #1

  14. Senior on December 9th, 2009 at 3:23 pm
  15. I’d say #3 looks the best. The white in the background catches your eye.

  16. Kevin on December 9th, 2009 at 3:40 pm
  17. Can’t wait to get my bundle so I can read more. I like cover #1.

  18. Joanne on December 9th, 2009 at 4:18 pm
  19. I would choose #2. #1 looks like many other books. #3 is too drab. #2 sets off the deadly portion the best.
    I’ve read Illuminated. Enjoyed the thriller aspect.

  20. Linda on December 9th, 2009 at 4:23 pm
  21. My daughter (Jackie) and I both agree that #1 is our favorite. It pops out with the color, and I like the image.

  22. Eric Wilson on December 9th, 2009 at 5:11 pm
  23. Cover #1 just edges out #3 as the best cover!

  24. BQ on December 9th, 2009 at 5:55 pm
  25. #1

  26. Jason on December 9th, 2009 at 5:59 pm
  27. I like the graphic from cover two but authors name from number 3

  28. Randy McWethy on December 9th, 2009 at 6:17 pm
  29. I vote #1

  30. Marcos on December 9th, 2009 at 6:48 pm
  31. My vote is for cover #1.

  32. Joshua Ashbaugh on December 9th, 2009 at 7:06 pm
  33. Number 1!

  34. Sharon on December 9th, 2009 at 7:43 pm
  35. I really like book cove number 3. It stands out to me and I like your name in blue. Blues and reds work for this book cover. It stands out.

    This was fun. Thanks for asking. All the best to you Matt!!

    Nora
    Finding Hope Through Fiction

  36. Nora St.Laurent on December 9th, 2009 at 8:19 pm
  37. Number 1!

  38. Joseph on December 9th, 2009 at 8:34 pm
  39. i vote for #1

  40. crystal anderson on December 9th, 2009 at 9:23 pm
  41. I vote for #3, the one that jumped at me first was #1, but it was mainly because there are many books that have come out lately that are in that same type of color scheme, so I like #3 because it is different and looks very cool! Nice job.

    Joseph Abiera

    PS. If you ever need graphic design work, I am a teacher at a college and would love to use you for any design projects that the students could work on.

  42. Joseph Abiera on December 9th, 2009 at 9:56 pm
  43. #2. I like the black and white with just a touch of color.
    #3 is too “Rush Hour”/”Leathal Weapon”.

  44. Larry on December 10th, 2009 at 12:57 am
  45. Mat love what your doing keep up the good work…. I have to say I like the first design the best… good luck with this book.

    Charlie

  46. Charlie Stayton on December 10th, 2009 at 5:40 am
  47. I vote for #1.

  48. C.J. Darlington on December 10th, 2009 at 7:42 am
  49. gotta b #1!

  50. Andi Hunt on December 10th, 2009 at 8:17 am
  51. This is pure torture.

  52. MJ @ Creative Madness on December 10th, 2009 at 9:52 am
  53. I like the composition on #1 the best, i.e., strength of design and overall balance. The coloration is very striking, though as previously mentioned is a very popular color choice. You might consider a gradient overlay from a pale yellow at the top to a deep crimson at the bottom.

    Anyway, my $0.02.

    #1

    alaric

  54. alaric on December 10th, 2009 at 11:13 am
  55. I vote for #2 and can’t wait for the book to come out.

  56. Sheri Evans on December 10th, 2009 at 2:09 pm
  57. I vote for #1 or #3. Fascinating books!

  58. Frank O. Rice on December 10th, 2009 at 7:36 pm
  59. Cover #1, Good Job cory.

  60. Ryan Little on December 11th, 2009 at 5:23 am
  61. I love the contrast of book cover #1 as well as the colors used to symbolize something ancient and dangerous (blood red). I also think you’ve got another winner here. I look forward to its publication.

    Pat

  62. Pat Concodora on December 11th, 2009 at 8:44 am
  63. I vote for #1 but #2 is also good.

  64. Oliwia on December 11th, 2009 at 9:41 am
  65. I like #3. Can’t wait to read it all in one sitting!

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