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TEN HOT WRITING TIPS FROM TEN HOT WRITERS

Posted On February 26th, 2010

I know what you’re thinking – you’re too busy! You don’t have the time to read all the writing tips listed recently at GUARDIAN.CO.UK

So I’ve done the hard work for you – choosing tips that spoke the loudest, that felt the most honest and usable.

Here they are, plucked from lists provided by ten of the hottest writers on the planet:

1. (Rose Tremain) Forget the boring old dictum “write about what you know”. Instead, seek out an unknown yet knowable area of experience that’s going to enhance your understanding of the world and write about that.

2. (Anne Enright) The way to write a book is to actually write a book. A pen is useful, typing is also good. Keep putting words on the page.

3. (Elmore Leonard) Never use a verb other than “said” to carry dialogue. The line of dialogue belongs to the character; the verb is the writer sticking his nose in. But “said” is far less intrusive than “grumbled”, “gasped”, “cautioned”, “lied”. I once noticed Mary McCarthy ending a line of dialogue with “she asseverated” and had to stop reading and go to the dictionary.

4. (Michael Morpurgo) It is the gestation time which counts.

5. (Neil Gaiman) Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong.

6. (Ian Rankin) Have a story worth telling.

7. (Margaret Atwood) You most likely need a thesaurus, a rudimentary grammar book, and a grip on reality. This latter means: there’s no free lunch. Writing is work. It’s also gambling. You don’t get a pension plan. Other people can help you a bit, but essentially you’re on your own. Nobody is making you do this: you chose it, so don’t whine.

8. (Sarah Waters) Pace is crucial. Fine writing isn’t enough. Writing students can be great at producing a single page of well-crafted prose; what they sometimes lack is the ability to take the reader on a journey, with all the changes of terrain, speed and mood that a long journey involves.

9. (Jonathan Franzen) Interesting verbs are seldom very interesting.

10. (Andrew Motion) Work hard.

Here’s one more…unnumbered…that I think most of us can relate to: (Philip Pullman) My main rule is to say no to things like this, which tempt me away from my proper work.

But what’s that, you say? You’ve got a writing tip that trumps the ones you’ve just read? Then, by all means, LET’S HEAR IT!

If you’ve got a writing tip the world needs to know, list it below in the comment section!

Holiday Bundle has Ended

Posted On December 16th, 2009

Thanks for all your orders of the holiday bundle! There will be many more specials coming up. So stay in touch so you don’t miss out!

- MB

Re: Deadly Hours Book Cover!

Posted On December 11th, 2009

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The votes are in! Thanks to all of you who helped make Cover #1 the winner (it was my personal favorite too!)
And stay tuned for more fun opportunities… there’s some cool things coming down the pipe.

- MB

Vote for The Deadly Hours book cover!

Posted On December 9th, 2009

Hi everyone! I need your help… My latest thriller – The Deadly Hours – needs a cover, and my friend Cory Clubb has created three awesome options to choose from! So which one is it going to be? VOTE NOW! Comment below this post, or email me at matt@mattbronleewe.com!

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The Deadly Hours – Preview

Posted On December 4th, 2009

CHAPTER ZERO

1244 AD
MONTSEGUR, FRANCE

Soon they would all be dead.

The Perfect watched as the pyre burst into flame at the base of the mountain. At the first break of dawn her fellow faithful would be thrown on the fire, and one by one they would exit this world and enter the glorious light of the next. She wished she could join them, but her task required her to stay alive, at least for a short time longer.

“I’m sorry to interrupt your prayers, master, but I’ve been told that the time has come for our escape.”

The Perfect turned to her apprentice, a young Believer with half her years and twice her enthusiasm. “Regrettably, you’re right. Are the others ready?”

“As ready as they could be for such a terrible journey.”

The Perfect placed a hand on the girl’s shoulder. She was closer to her than her own daughter, who had attempted to turn her in to the Holy Roman Empire. It wasn’t a surprise—the entire land had become traitorous since a bounty had been placed on her head. She was a Cathar, a dangerous title in France.

There was a day when the Cathars lived freely. They worshiped in secret, but not in fear. They were tolerated. Even revered. They were known as ‘the Good Christians’ for their virtue and benevolence. But times had changed. The Holy Roman Empire had become jealous of both their esteem, and more importantly, their money. People gave freely to the Cathars, knowing the dollars would be repaid tenfold in charity. The Holy Roman Empire, less so. So it was decided that the Cathars must be terminated, before their influence grew too wide to conquer.

They picked the right time. Bloodlust ran high on account of the many Crusades. But this was the first time the swords had pointed inward, at their own brothers, sisters, husbands, and wives.

Thousands had died already. Willingly. The Cathars were a peaceful people, their ethereal beliefs slacking the grip of the world on their hearts. They embraced death, recognized it as a porthole to a glorious future. But now they were slipping toward the edge of extinction—by morning the Cathars would be virtually eliminated from the earth.

The Holy Roman Empire had won.

Almost.

There was still one crucial detail that had managed to slip through their fingers. The one thing the Cathars held in their possession that the Holy Roman Empire desired most—

The Book of Love.

What the book contained was known only among the innermost core of the Cathar elect, the high priests, those known as ‘Perfects’. Legends had spread that the Book of Love caused even the most doubtful men to fall under the trance of Catharism when shown its pages. The Holy Roman Empire combated these tall tales with one of their own—

The book was a myth. Nothing more.

The Perfect looked down at the blessed Book of Love in her hands. It felt quite sturdy for a myth.

“Is that—?” The Believer stopped short of naming the fabled item aloud.

“It is,” the Perfect said, wondering if the girl would ever have a chance to marvel at the mystery locked inside, to be transformed by its power. She sensed the answer deep within her heart, but fought back the sorrow it provoked.

She put her arm around the Believer and led her toward the concealed rear exit of the mountaintop chateau. The people inside—numbering almost 400—sat in silent respect as they passed by. The Perfect reached out to them, but most could not hold their hands high enough to meet hers. Their bodies were withered and weak, a result of the endura, a ritual the Cathars reserved for the dying. The endura required the Cathar to be sustained only through small amounts of cool water, ensuring death with a week’s time.

The Perfect stopped before reaching the end of the line of people, kneeling to greet a particularly frail old woman. “I see that the endura has all but taken you,” she said softly.

The old woman slowly drew in a breath. “May it take me before they do.”

The Perfect placed her palm over her eyes. “Go,” she whispered in her ear. The old woman’s chest rose and fell a final time, and then she was gone.

The Believer leaned down and took the old woman’s hand. “Master, I don’t know if I have enough faith.”

The Perfect peered into the girl’s eyes, remembering that her mother and father were part of the company that would soon be burned alive. “You will when it’s required of you. Don’t worry, young one. God won’t place more on your shoulders than you can bear.”

As she spoke the encouragement, the Perfect felt the heaviness of her own burden—ensuring the preservation of the Book of Love. It was a task that required the strength of an army. She prayed that she might survive the test ahead.

Two men in brown cloaks approached. They were Listeners. Though they were both older than the Believer, they were less versed in the Cathar faith.

“Follow me,” the taller of the two said. “I’ve been told that the soldiers have retreated to the other side of the mountain. If we leave now we should have safe passage.”

The other scoffed. “The soldiers are the least of our worries. The slope is treacherous enough during the day. But we don’t even have the light of the moon to guide us tonight.”

“Our path is not one seen with human eyes,” the Perfect said. “If God desires it, He will lead us to safety.”

The Perfect led the way to the hidden door. She unlatched the locks and pushed it open. The night air was still. Not even the chirping of the crickets could be heard.

“Young one? Are you there?” whispered the Perfect.

“I’m here,” said the Believer.

“Do you remember me saying than when the time was right, you’d have the faith you need?”

“Yes.”

The Perfect took the girl’s hands, invisible in the darkness, and placed the Book of Love inside them. “Now is that time.”

“No—” the Believer said. “I can’t.”

“You must,” the Perfect said. “Once we reach the base of the mountain the soldiers will chase us. I’m no match for their speed. But you are.”

The Believer said nothing in response.

The Perfect’s confidence waned for a moment. Could this young one take on such an important task? Suddenly the Believer grasped the book. The Perfect smiled, wishing her young acolyte could see her warm approval. “May the spirit of Esclarmonde go with you,” she said. “Someday you will be rewarded for this act of bravery.”

But not tonight, the Perfect thought as they began their difficult journey down the mountain.
Tonight we will suffer.

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THE PRESENT
MONTSEGUR, FRANCE

Soon they would all be dead.

A cold wind rushed over the mountaintop. August Adams clutched his ex-wife April tightly to his chest and cried out for help.

No one responded to his call.

He pressed his fingers against her neck, desperate for a heartbeat, but there was no pulse.

He laid her on the ground, in the middle of the ruins where the Cathar castle once stood.
In the light of the full moon, he spied the outline of a killer, perched high on one of the four ancient walls, arms outstretched to the heavens.

August had risked everything to find the Book of Love.

How had everything gone so wrong?

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